The burrito story!!
Ok. Lemme go read it! Lol
Omggg - This is so gooood!! I don’t even know where to start!
First off, the writing style is so easy to read and get into! I loveee the dialogue. This is exactly what I imagined the burrito story would be like and more!!
The rhyming adds just the right amount of fun to the story. I love that you wrote out Pete’s inner musings.
This is great! Just great!
And I love that you threw the Michelin Man reference in there!
Let’s get mushayyy!
That could be Pete’s newborn kid.
The Idea Machine is still chuggin’ along. To paraphrase Mr. Burns from The Simpsons: “The creative percolations are imminent.”
XD I started to give him a mustache.
I picture Pete with the Michelin Man look (and thank you KK for that contribution to his design) but much thinner (yet still some huskiness to account for the additional mass the marshmallow adds) and with short, wavy white hair in 'Mallow Mode.
In ‘Mallow Mode, Pete’s eyes are a bit oversized and he usually has a big smile most of the time because of his perky fluffiness. When he’s in Bouncing Ball Mode, he usually has a big ol’ smile (he likes to bounce apparently).
I’d be curious to see your design based on this description.